Sunday, January 20, 2008

3 good narrative sentences.

1. Repressed desires, sultry women, sweltering weather and a handsome new stranger in town, these were just the beginning of the story.

2. She was so overcome with grief when she received the devastating news of the passing of her father that she sobbed uncontrollably.

3. The traumatising experience left her both physically and emotionally scarred for life.

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